GCU Forum - Need Verse Help Please

Sherry_205423 Gold Member Posts: 743	Re: Need Verse Help Please Reply #15 - Nov 13^th, 2012, 1:34pm Hey everyone, I just thought of another idea. Do you think it would read better if I reversed the lines? What I mean is put the last two first and the first two last. What do you think?
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Alda_133805 Senior Member artist Posts: 485	Re: Need Verse Help Please Reply #16 - Nov 13^th, 2012, 1:39pm Yes, I agree. When I write poetry, I often rearrange the verses for a better flow.
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Alda_133805 Senior Member artist Posts: 485	Re: Need Verse Help Please Reply #17 - Nov 13^th, 2012, 1:41pm I thought of one more. Since you're talking about wishes in the plural ... I'd wish those wishes endlessly.
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Re: Need Verse Help Please
Reply #18 - Nov 13^th, 2012, 1:58pm

And the winner is...

Ok. I really appreciate everyone's great ideas. Below is what I decided on. I wanted the card for a child or an adult. You all are fantastic!! Let me know what you think.

Remember, it's a Military Miss You Card. BTW, the front is looking through a frosted window at a mailbox with flags and a yellow ribbon. On the frosted glass is written, "I Miss You" and a heart. (I learned how to frost glass in ps, well more like snow.

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I miss you more than words can say,
I'm counting the minutes every day.
If wishes could bring you home to me,
I'd blink my eyes and here you'd be.

Stay safe. Come home soon.

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Cathy_183701 Junior Member artist Posts: 93	Re: Need Verse Help Please Reply #19 - Nov 13^th, 2012, 2:04pm Sherry, I LOVE IT, Thank you for choosing the "i'd blink my eyes and there you'd be now that i see what the topic is, it makes perfect sense. The beauty is you have lot's of verse's now, and that means lot's more cards Take care Sherry, can't wait to see the final result Cathy artfromtheheart
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janet_189076 Junior Member Posts: 96	Re: Need Verse Help Please Reply #20 - Nov 13^th, 2012, 2:06pm I think Cheryl had the best idea
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Alda_133805 Senior Member artist Posts: 485	Re: Need Verse Help Please Reply #21 - Nov 13^th, 2012, 2:13pm LOVE it!!! I like that choice, too. Sounds like the art will complement the verse perfectly. Good job, Sherry. Look forward to seeing it.
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Cathy_183701 Junior Member artist Posts: 93	Re: Need Verse Help Please Reply #22 - Nov 13^th, 2012, 2:16pm It was a combined effort Sherry, and you made the final decision, bravo, Who ever purchases that card, will be a happy customer Cathy artfromtheheart
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Sherry_205423 Gold Member Posts: 743	Re: Need Verse Help Please Reply #23 - Nov 13^th, 2012, 2:22pm Here's a link to the card on another site. Let me know what yu think. http://www.zazzle.com/military_i_miss_you_card-137161529491450754
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Cathy_183701 Junior Member artist Posts: 93	Re: Need Verse Help Please Reply #24 - Nov 13^th, 2012, 2:31pm Sherry, I adore it, you put a lot of thought into that card. I personally think it will do very well especially in these tough times. Cathy artfromtheheart
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